At this moment, I’m going crazy participating in Savvy
Author’s Editpalooza. I picked an old
draft from NaNoWriMo 2010. While not officially complete, there is enough
material to finish it once I iron out the trouble spots. The problem is those
spots after the first three chapters. It's
going to be painful to work through it in one month, but I’m willing to
learn how to edit fast.
I haven’t touched the draft since that NaNo, so it opened my
eyes to my three main problems:
- A classic moment of pantsing. It started great, and then it went downhill after my main character left home. The original idea devolved quickly, and the scenes shifted my original ideas. The plot left in the fifth chapter and never returned.
- I hate my characters.
- Somehow my novel turned into a fantasy romance novel instead of a high fantasy novel.
Unfortunately, approaching writing as a pantser can spell
doom when you realize there isn’t much to work with. I wrote 71k, but how many
good words are there? If I’m lucky, probably not more than 20k. I lost touch
with the reality of the world I created. It’s painful to read and more painful
knowing I wrote it. The first draft is meant to be this way, but I still didn’t
want to believe it. Yet, I accept them to move forward.
How about you? Do you think you can edit fast?
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